The Call

****Previously Henry had discovered a clue. Click the link for the last installment of Vivid Black Exposing Fury (Finding Answers)

Phone snatched, he dialed the morgue.


“Yeah, Jonesie?”

Don’t call me Jonesie.  ‘Sup?”

“I’m lookin’ over the files. I found something.”


“Where’s the trace analysis from the victims?”

“What? It’s not there?”


TrifectaFor Trifextra Week 53 we have this prompt:

For the weekend prompt we’re asking for exactly 33 words of dialogue. I’m leading you on a bit more with the previous cliffhanger in Vivid Black. Some answers are on the horizon. 🙂

To read the entire Vivid Black series so far, Click HERE


25 comments on “The Call

  1. […] ****Previously Henry made a phone call. Click the link for the last installment of Vivid Black – The Call […]


  2. atrm61 says:

    Missing info?oh,oh,now this gets interesting-wonder if someone within the force is helping the murderer?Good piece:-)


  3. Lumdog says:

    Great dialogue. I need to read the rest.


  4. Libby says:

    I admire you being able to work a serial around these various prompts!


    • debseeman says:

      I’m motivated by the characters and a particular fellow blogger who also has a prompt and pushes me for “more please” all the time. 😉


  5. Lance says:

    Ok, where the heck is it?

    excellent, but I want MORE


  6. Will get in on this story. Thanks for hooking me 😉


  7. Draug419 says:

    If it was there would he be asking you for it? That’s what my step-mother would have said in such a situation lol Great piece. I love the noir-ish feel.


    • debseeman says:

      Thanks Draug. I weave in and out of the noir style depending on the prompt and my mood or the characters mood. They are kind of bossy when they get a voice. LOL!


  8. rangewriter says:

    Did I stumble into a segment of CSI? Well done.


    • debseeman says:

      I use my love for CSI shows and being married to a cop to keep it as real as possible. Glad I worked it right. Thanks for the compliment 🙂


  9. Oops. I hope they find the analysis quickly – trace evidence is HUGELY important! Hmmm… what could be next?


  10. Suzanne says:

    Love it – great dialogue! *goes back to read more of the series*


  11. jannatwrites says:

    Never a good sign when evidence turns up missing. Would definitely like to see more of this one!


  12. deanabo says:

    uh oh! That’s never good!


  13. Linda Vernon says:

    Well now! This gets your attention! 😀


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