****Previously Henry had discovered a clue. Click the link for the last installment of Vivid Black – Exposing Fury (Finding Answers)
Phone snatched, he dialed the morgue.
“Yeah, Jonesie?”
“Don’t call me Jonesie. ‘Sup?”
“I’m lookin’ over the files. I found something.”
“OhhhK.”
“Where’s the trace analysis from the victims?”
“What? It’s not there?”
For Trifextra Week 53 we have this prompt:
For the weekend prompt we’re asking for exactly 33 words of dialogue. I’m leading you on a bit more with the previous cliffhanger in Vivid Black. Some answers are on the horizon. 🙂
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[…] ****Previously Henry made a phone call. Click the link for the last installment of Vivid Black – The Call […]
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Missing info?oh,oh,now this gets interesting-wonder if someone within the force is helping the murderer?Good piece:-)
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Oh thanks! So glad you enjoyed it.
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🙂
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Great dialogue. I need to read the rest.
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I’m glad you enjoyed it. Look for the link in the bar at the top. I keep it updated so its all there.
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I admire you being able to work a serial around these various prompts!
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I’m motivated by the characters and a particular fellow blogger who also has a prompt and pushes me for “more please” all the time. 😉
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Ok, where the heck is it?
excellent, but I want MORE
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I’ll keep chugging them out. The little train who could right?
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Will get in on this story. Thanks for hooking me 😉
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Thanks for reading. I appreciate your comment.
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If it was there would he be asking you for it? That’s what my step-mother would have said in such a situation lol Great piece. I love the noir-ish feel.
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Thanks Draug. I weave in and out of the noir style depending on the prompt and my mood or the characters mood. They are kind of bossy when they get a voice. LOL!
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Did I stumble into a segment of CSI? Well done.
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I use my love for CSI shows and being married to a cop to keep it as real as possible. Glad I worked it right. Thanks for the compliment 🙂
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Oops. I hope they find the analysis quickly – trace evidence is HUGELY important! Hmmm… what could be next?
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Hope you made it to the next installment. They did, now Jonesie has some splainin’ to do. Henry is not a happy camper.
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Great dialogue.
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Thanks and thanks for stopping by.
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Love it – great dialogue! *goes back to read more of the series*
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Yay! Glad you like it enough to go back and catch up.
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Never a good sign when evidence turns up missing. Would definitely like to see more of this one!
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uh oh! That’s never good!
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Well now! This gets your attention! 😀
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