Not Sorry

****Click here for previous installment of Vivid Black –> Misbehavin

Head jerked to escape the vicious, painful memory. Doomed to his life’s chain of events, he leapfrogged to Kimberly. Dead Kimberly. Druggie cheating wife Kimberly.

Then Josh. Dead Josh. Cheating best-friend Josh. Kim, dead from an overdose. Josh, dead at his hands. Remorse didn’t mar the achieved redemption.

He thought “nothing is my fault.”

Head tipped back, eyes closed, smiling, he remembered the release, the satisfaction.

He exhaled, bent over and bloused tactical khaki’s over his Danners. He shrugged into his leather, and slid the shiny star onto his belt.


Vivid Black get’s it’s second post today with Lance and LeeRoy’s 100 Word Song. Dawn at The Dawnie Project chose this weeks song “Sorry For It All” by Dead Sara. I’m sorry to say I’ve never listened to anything from this band, and I’ve really missed out because this is a great song.

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7 comments on “Not Sorry

  1. Lance says:

    I like how you contrentrated the inspiration at the beginning then delivered those last two lines. This was really meaty and easy to read. more please.


  2. Rene says:

    what Lance said 🙂


  3. Tara R. says:

    He seems so nonchalant, totally un-phased by what is happening. Lends to the creepy feeling of the story.


  4. Oh I need to know more! Great passage.


    • debseeman says:

      You chose a great song this week. I really like this band and will be listening to more. Thanks for stopping by Dawn. 🙂


  5. barbara says:

    whoa! one step back from his own doing, eh? Nothing’s my fault . . . at all, at all. 🙂


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